Creepy, intriguing, full of great lines and descriptions that draw the characters clearly in your head. This might be weird, but I think my favorite part was the diner scene, it was so eerie.
"I picked up on the diner's vibes like the beginnings of a gnarly migraine, all dull aches along the orbital bone ready to push further up the cranium at the faintest hint of a too-bright light."
“Favorite spot,” he said, jabbing a thumb towards a booth nestled between a jukebox and a table overrun by haunted teenage girls."
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"Ma always said I was late to everything. My death was the exception."
I also love this line!
Creepy, intriguing, full of great lines and descriptions that draw the characters clearly in your head. This might be weird, but I think my favorite part was the diner scene, it was so eerie.
"I picked up on the diner's vibes like the beginnings of a gnarly migraine, all dull aches along the orbital bone ready to push further up the cranium at the faintest hint of a too-bright light."
“Favorite spot,” he said, jabbing a thumb towards a booth nestled between a jukebox and a table overrun by haunted teenage girls."
I love these lines!
this was a haunting short read. your description was so visceral!!!
thank you!! i'm happy to hear it.